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Post by White Chedda on Dec 21, 2004 23:20:08 GMT -5
iight people, this ya boi mike...hearz tha rules... -Drop ya linez at least 8 barz -You can freestyle bout nething yu want -Ghetto/Def poetry is allowed just mark it so we know -If you punkin someone, then expect to be punked back -Dont take tha insultz too seriousli b/c yall my boiz and we all kool wit eachother -If you tell someone they suck or that they got sum shyt, give em propz n tell them WHY!!!, no one gonna get better without feedback.
Iight thas it, and juss chyll n have fun.
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As i roll down Newark, i see destruction at my door Ashes on buildinz across tha street from explosions years before Even tha rainfall pours down and strainz ta wipe tha memory Time flies slower than angelz so its hard to stop remembering Yet they died for known reasonz, to keep tha rest of us alive Broken tearz intrudin broken heartz, forgive tha family that cries And till my demise ill remember tha forgotten Left ta realize my state of being as one as bein dotted With scarz of broken hopes, expectationz now on tha low Time to formulate a plot hoping my grave is comin slow Do i know God will save me or has my rage taken me? I was made from dust but now Satanz tha one makin me Locked in a crypt while demon howlz infest my mind Lost in tha time before mine, so neva livin wuz my crime And you ask how one lives without tha feelin of livin high I already looked forward to livin once, now im just lookin forward ta die
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Post by Swisha on Dec 22, 2004 15:06:14 GMT -5
Gun powder on his palms he runs home to take a shower After hours holdin metal now he feels the power red eyes full of anger and tears It's a life or death trap through the multiple years KILLAS! thinkin shallow start listenin to peers It's time to be a man Yo It's time to face your fears.
He Tried to lay down but he couldn't close his eyes The sound off of the shot is still taped on his mind He starts to think quick if his world goes crazy How would I live ? How can I protect my baby?
Then he starts holding her close, clinching her tight I'm going to give u everything so u can put up a fight
Daddys gone but for now he's iight you don't worry bout mine just go live a good life
Angels of the east, north south and west. Promise me that your lookin down while she rest
He grabbed his gun and made his way out Didn't hear sh*t when his girl screamed out
Darker than Dark only a monster can see. He hears footsteps hot breath on his neck Rows and allies
He stopped and looked shook to a sign Statin, The slower you run the faster you die Felt the blood in his chest and let out a cry
Fell down to the floor he sees his life flash between his eyes Now he's dead and his girl living in a lie
tell me how u like that the story is bout a man pushed to the edge and how life in the CHI CITY!!!!! is Let me get some feedback Mike the otha song wuz only a freestyle this is me writing is a lot betta
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Post by Special_K on Dec 22, 2004 20:26:55 GMT -5
More short line nuts, but bare with me:
I rap cynically tear you down mentally and physically show you no humanity boy who lost his sanity admire my vanity my viability my vitality and lastly best respect my ability to rip this poetry for all the world to see
spec to the k spin you round so fast think you back in the day sayin "hey hey hey" to a single man KKK
wanna talk to me? b***h, take a number choke hold, knock you out into a deep, deep slumber Ave World goin' under waitin' to execute another f**ker
rap like jada and kayslay u vs. me like comparing a puppet show and Broadway comin at me on a street that goes one way bigger than the Macy's Day Parade Still think you can touch me? Boy, im outraged you just my peasant i'm your king...........
I don't know, I got bored
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Post by White Chedda on Dec 22, 2004 21:11:23 GMT -5
iight chi, i think yu got a lil bit of lyrical poetry goin on... just yu needa seperate ya linez better, make the rhyme at the end of a line and start the next one, dont type it how yu rap it...well hear it layta.
You got some nice linez n i wuz feelin tha story also.
--------------------------------------------------------------------- Spec K, ya linez are still too short, but were betta then tha last onez yu posted.
tha last verse wuz tha best cuz of tha 'puppet show and Broadway' line, but keep uppin ya skillz man.
~1~
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Swisha
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Post by Swisha on Dec 22, 2004 22:05:32 GMT -5
man that not even close 2 wut I can do Spec K lets bring out our best u 2 White Chedda
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Post by One on Dec 22, 2004 23:57:44 GMT -5
i can come up in the thread and just slaughter you all but i'd rather take it slow and just show you how i ball my rhymes so hott, make you melt like candle wax but i'll turn down the heat and i'll rap without the beat 7 years in the game i'd put ya'll to shame but i'll stay away from names cuz we rep the same thang BANG! BANG! click, blucka, click click my clips on empty got the spare on my hip, you don't wanna test my sh!t, i'll bust you in the lip, hit you so hard you do a back flip, slip, fall and bite your tongue keep my name in your mouth if you wanna tussle son i'm a rapid fire spitter and i go by "ONE" we can go toe to toe or you can bring a gun before you pull it out this battle will be done!
just a little something i through togethger real quick......i didn't want to just let loose on you guys...that wouldn't be fair now would it??? lol..........
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Post by Swisha on Dec 23, 2004 14:34:02 GMT -5
I tired of nigga's actin like they can rap I'll just sit right here and smoke on my tap Nigga sayin spit quick but I'm gonna tell u like this b**ch get off my d**k bet u wanna know how I come wit these words I'm gonna give 2 u str8 nigga f**k what u heard So now what the F**k's up you gonna feel it when I rush str8 from yo muthaf**kin gut I must come from right 2 left u betta watch u step Or u gonna feel death right in yur chest u betta wear a vest cuz I don't f**k wit tha rest still not the best but ni**a u don't wanna test my stress
spec K yur verse were tight One u tight 2 my u and mike wit spec k we would be nasty as me and mike as producers wit u and spec k as artist we'd blow shit up
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Post by White Chedda on Dec 23, 2004 15:12:31 GMT -5
Dont start testin me cuz im ALWAYZ on track I got 9s strapped round my waist and all yu got is a fanny pack I get encorez and whistlez, cuz people thinkin im funny I got benjiz under my pillow and yu use sand dollars for money When i blast at ya ass ill have yu runnin faster than cold noses Ill split ya rhymez in half like tha red sea split my moses Im tha coolest ever! even through all tha summer Watchin both ya rolez in ya movie dumb and dumber Numba 1 stunna cuz i got yu shocked like a taser Im cuttin down wack EMceez like hair against a shaver Twistin ya mind like handz of a raver Even though ya rhymez are ass ill still give yu one wish Ill let yu write ya rhymez while i put water in ya mommas dish
not directed at neone...juss needed ta post since everyone else wuz
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Post by Special_K on Dec 23, 2004 19:27:22 GMT -5
Yo Chedda, I rapped this nuts real nice to "To Know Why We Do" number 17 on Newgrounds sorted by ratings. I wish I could post my rappin it streets of newburgh growin' up in newburgh the streets from hell feelin' like I'm in Iraq shooting infidels Akon was right these streets ARE like quicksand livin in the underworld, runnin from da nether land and if I can manage to escape this pain and this hate and to make something of myself Then I'll be the first and the last to survive and to pass whenever I look out, someone need s**t to sell each one of my own in trouble becomin' all to familiar with the belt drugs sold on da corner, kids cring out 4 help live next to a f**k who killed his wife took the shotgun then popped hisself burning buildings, exaseperating our health stabbing in school, wanna know what else? Every day I wake up tears staining my eyes knowing that everyday i live in a world concieved from lies and nothing new every day not another surprise and each day another laid to rest another one to die cuz this Earth devoid of integrity and honesty filled with hatred and envy predjiduce and jealousy disfavor and enmity rancor, hostility discontent and animosity why doesit do this to me? why can't i see the light? Why is it impossibel to peer through the night? Why is it so hard to know whats right? To live in Newburgh To die in Newburgh To love in Newburgh To survive in Newburgh Is simply a Godsend And I beleive that we can live together Have God taketh Allow me to deliver unto you another lesson Send you a vision Like an angel out of heaven Stop you from revvin' up that engine With one two many drinks in your system Lets cool it down Lets work it out No need for violence No need to shout Man calm the f**k down Fore' you lose your head Gotta chestful of anger And a Clip's worth of lead And if you let it go Then none of us will know What you could've been able to do Your whole life ahead of you AD-LIB: And Alex I love you man May God watch over your soul You lived it to da fullest And we remember you Through the way that you lived Not the way you passed Peace to all God's children And respect For all....... Alex Porcher 1986-2004 Props to all and to all a happy holidays
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Post by gatz on Dec 23, 2004 20:54:59 GMT -5
its the G to the A to the T to the Z, rappin for yall and defendin our country// killin arabs w/ an s-m-g... or a fully f*ckin loaded m16// when i speak of bullets i mean my lyrical raps... either way when im done you'll be hearin taps// and on your grave stone it will say "murdered by gatz"// so quit runnin your trap or you'll end up on yo back// they'll look at me and i'll say "yo he had a heart attack cause my rhymes is phat"
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Post by gatz on Dec 23, 2004 20:55:19 GMT -5
(ps. i know "rhymes is phat isnt grammatically correct... it just sounded cool..... hehe ^_^)
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Post by Special_K on Dec 23, 2004 20:57:59 GMT -5
Woooooo, very nice.......mind if I ask who you voted for in the last election Gatz?
Great raps, awesome rhymes, and really there is no need to be gramatically correct......
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Post by gatz on Dec 23, 2004 21:01:07 GMT -5
funny thing spec.... im in the military..... but im 17 so i cant vote lol.... but i turn 18 in like 6 days.... on the 29th ^_^..... but i would of voted for bush.... anyways... thanks for the encourage... </transmission>
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Post by Special_K on Dec 23, 2004 21:05:42 GMT -5
Well, keep protecting us out there man, I don't exactly agree with Bush's ideas on the war but I support our troops 100%. Keep it up Gatz,
Spec. K
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Post by Special_K on Dec 25, 2004 14:05:32 GMT -5
rcrdeluks this works real well wit Those Who Gone....
Unknown Agony
My girl has had to live through s**t in her life Everyday another argument, every day another fight She used to ease her pain wit a razor-edged knife Pillows stained wit tears, cried from 6 AM to midnight Ex-boyfriend was an ass, used to beat her onsight Till I found out, came down, and dimmed each one of his lights And I know dis s**t is wrong, I tell her it aint right Try to show her my love, wit all my heart, wit all my might
She's an amazing woman, an inspiration to all But whenever she got on top, she had a long way to fall Her heart would stop sometimes, like a car that stalled Never had a man to love her, or even one to call To tell her how amazing she is, the joy she can give To the whole f*****g world, and not just him He sits up at night and wonders If he can give her a reason to live A reason to be oblivious, to all dis other s**t
Beatings and ridicule were always just the norm She fell into a pattern, of being forlorn She whethered the weather, and not just the storm Her parents never loved her, just made her feel torn Between love and hate Destiny and fate Home or a date Between Sean and Kate Unknown agony Coming from the one that I beleive Can deliver me from these horendous deeds Everyone else is blind, compared to the s**t shes seen Mom used to hit her, cut her open, and make her bleed Forgotten loves, lost rites, have made her eyes keen Payed with her soul, man that an insurmountable fee Just to sit here and break down every day Girl, you I love you, just please beleive me Your my inspiration, your the one who made me Spec. K Your the one who lived this pain from Sepetember to May Just follow me now girl, lemme show you the right way
CHORUS
I know that your the one A Goddess to me A gift for all the world to see Let me flaunt you, see if you can concieve The amount of ardency and piety I have for thee Kate, girl you mean the world to me Without you, I'd be deathly And I know your stuck in bad habits Let me try and break that evil presence Stuck in your soul, destroy that backward seven Stay wit me now girl Let me show you true contenment Be happy for once girl, be filled wit merriement Forget about all this, forget the oppression Forget this Hell, forget this dejection Come with me now Kate, let me show you the true Heaven Find refuge in me, let me be your safe haven I'll be Edgar Allen Poe, and you can be my Raven Let me show you my adulation my undying and unriquitting affection
CHORUS
I know you love to easily Kate But these no need to cry Shush, shush baby girl I'm not here to lie Its true you know, that if If I had to die To save your life, I'd do it in a heartbeat It a nanosecond, light speed I'm not like your other boyfriends I'm not just in it for the sex And there is no need to look for the next I'll be with you for eternity We'll live forever, with joyous immortality Would you like that, Kate? Would that make you beleive in me?
CHORUS (One)
CHORUS (Two)
With all my might.....might.....might.........
Just a something bout my gf
FEEDBACK NEEDED!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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